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Old 11-01-05, 02:23 AM   #38
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Originally Posted by gdot
the beat choppin is sloppy snares are wack hook singing sounds off pitched i duno
the first cat got a nice delivery quality got some his success line is cool this is a solid verse ur flow seems a little repetitive switch it up during the verse.
hook agian....
flow switched up so that nice styll flow on point as far as i can tell this is a solid track.work on delivery bit and chrisma on some of ya lines



Probably the most knowledgable feedback I've read here in months. Good looks.

BTW, I happen to like the snares.
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