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Old 05-17-05, 05:59 PM   #6
Adam
 
Posts: 13,383
From: Canada
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And lately, marvjay been on my nuts to... shit's making me sick
So this battle is weight off my shoulders... chest, waist, and dick
Good opener, 6/10
See that's complexity, marv aint got no wit, so place your bids
Cuz the only time he uses his head... Is when he's with newkid
Meh, word it better, 5/10
I'm known to have kung-fu moves, so watch who your dissing
Quick to kick yo head just to have a leg up on the competition
Nice concept, coulda worded better, 7/10
Back to topics, I 'arkansaw' your body like american city wrists
Got so many dicks down ya throat we could call it an esofagus
Great set-up, and dope punch, 8/10
And i'm a fucking weed head yo! So watch me smoke this 'jay'
Then crunch so many chips in his teath...
...you'd think he was eating lays!
Haha, nice concept again, 8/10
I cast lightning, just to leave you under bad weather, ya feel?
And 'eyenose' your weak, so when your hit...
...they'll come together f'real
This was fucking dope, 9/10
Proceed on to smack your lip, so you can 'see something swell'
Then beat this faggot into a 'cast' like it was a sorcerors spell!
Good shit for the closer, 8/10

Overall : 51/70 = 72.8%


ima damage dis guy,cant cum "up wit a punch" putin "hands in da sky".
fam ya niggaz like da "GiNGER aLE" every mc datz from "CaNaDa'S-DRy".
This was actually good, 8/10
give up u cant text-lame,when techz aim ima leave you wit a wet frame.
and put ya "GENiUS on a ps2" cuzz i aint really with da "head games".
This had been flipped around more then gymnasts, 4/10
you "scared of *TROOP*" fagget ur saught of like and "arabian bum".
i fucked his moms so like "STEVE NaSH" jack is my "canadian-SUN".
Momma lines = played, but wordplay was ok, 6/10
marv a smash dis nigga,its funny ppl really think dat ya raps is sicker.
^^^^^^^i guess thats why u changed ya name 2 "JaCK" the ripper.
Simple, but good, 7/10
ya rec. under head games is 4-7 lol ppl dont peep ya raps u borin dem.
jack's gay he stay "ON TOP OF C.a.L.i" like da "state of OREGON".
Fake personal, and played concept, 4/10
u lil annoyin fuck boy ya suck any asshole stepin da marv i solve em.
jack i'll put ya "site in a math book" then ask u do u have a "eye-problem".
Kinda played, but you flipped it good, 7/10

Overall : 34/60 = 56.6%

You both came hard, but MaRV came a little more played...also JTR had some dope wordplay...so...

Vote : Jack The Ripper