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Old 12-31-04, 06:40 PM   #6
Nynth Degree
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Triple N:
You must of forgot you wack due to too many bong hits
See, cuz a weed dependcy is only thing u gotta "deal wit"
Decent opener, ok personal
Claimin' u spray Sk's, I say its B.S., I know u ain't hoodin'
But ya lies bring tears to cosby's eyes......................
..........................cuz you proved "proof is in da puddin'"
Decent setup, punch was lacking
Ya gurlish voice is a sign of u bein' in prepubescent grapple
Cuz at the dawn of man eve was led to eat "adams apple"
Good wordplay here, had to read it twice but I uderstood it
Your verses is "2-pac's" & "ja-net" skillz ain't "jack-son"
U gettin' ate's "poetic joetice"...............................
......like bicuspids I mash Leftover Edible Delicates, dun
Dope setup, nice wordplay, punch hit, but could've been worded better
Plain & simpe u suck, it'd be dumb luck if ya made me duck
Do any ya punches take karate lessons? cuz "none-chuck"
Lol good multis in setup, punch hit, even had me laughin' a little bit
In verses & real life u "stumb in da middle" ya prob lingers
Dats why throught out this verse I'm giving you "da finger"
Decent personal
RB prooved u a biter & I'm pose to believe a change in you?
Fuck dat! I'm a be cautious..................
.......& erase all my cpu cookies cuz u might bite those too
Another decent personal, but mixed with a cretive punch. nice closer

Led Poetic:
Bye...Triple N?? I wont even ask how you got this far in this..
But how's it possible to have an ego bigger than ya sig
Decent personal, but the bar didn't really rhyme, so opener was blah
Wack fuck, he'll soon find out it's the win he's missin..
Kids breath is so bad, his audios come in mint condition
Good personal, made up for a weak setup
I spread like a disease, so my fists'll spread on this bitch
Dumb fuck thought an infestation played today's top hits
Decent meta here
I'll blow ya all apart, and leave nothin but steam and vapors
Whats worse is...
Ya verse has more quotes than my college English paper
Another good personal here, nice punch too
^That's a predetermined punch...I aint seen ya shit yet
And I aint talkin countries when your loss is easy Tibet
Nice wordplay in the punch, overall a good bar
Master of punchlines? how can we respect your shit??
When his location isnt where he's from..it's what he is
Decent personal, creative way to word a "gay" punch
You fuckin drop garbage...and that's ya style bitch..
After I murder ya you'll feel at home...
Cuz I'll leave Triple.....N the fucking dumps as it is
Nice play off his name, good closer overall

As close as this one was, I'ma have to give it to Led Poetic. His opener was weak, but he made up for it with the rest of his verse. Punches/personals/metas stayed consistent. Trip you had a good verse too, some nice punches and wordplay, but the thing that brought your verse down was the personals. You used personals that I wouldn't have got unless you had the explanations, so that was a negative aspect of your drop. But no hate, keep bangin'...

V// Led Poetic
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ninth your a fucking idiot and im purposly spelling your name wrong...


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