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Old 12-15-04, 03:05 AM   #6
4fil
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This dude reps SC n wonders y ppl say tha souf iz wak
Even Majic Johnson refused 2 purchase ya A-Tracks
^^^booooo, crowd isnt please by your opener.
Im lethal wit verbs, wont hesitate ta give this dude a beating
Its 2 bad that ya Ghost-writers went out Trick-or-Treating
^^^^rhymes was forced.. punch was alright... dont self glorify
U’d think I hate Art tha way I damage ya Frame
Start bitin raps, cuz I cant Picture u ill, all I c iz Poor-Traits
^^^an aight punch... very played
Ya Shoulderz iz Cracked, now im leavin ya Head on ya Back
Ur Under fire so how u gone take Over tha match
^^^.....mmmmm an alright punch, again heard it before
Ur Underarms like Deodorant, u aint potent, jus ass
Like havin Sex n tha Dumpster, this kids Fuking Trash
^^^heard itbefore
Didnt like your verse... it had no personals in it whatsoever.... some of the punches were bitten.... because i had heard most of them before... work on you personals


your fucked just resign...no punch in ya lines...
oh and heres a new concept...multiple rhymes...
^^lol... good multies... nice opener
want some advice? sound better...how you plan to sell records?
when you cant even figure out how to work the spell checker...
^^^mmmm, an aight punch here
WErD I SkEEtZ on DEEz HOEZ...wow hes street! the shit shows!..
looks like he typed his whole fuckin verse with his nose...
^^^hahahahah nice
damn...he must have chilled with some thugs at one point...
cause judgin by his verse he wrote every punch at gunpoint...
^^meh.... its was alright
whyd you even sign up for this tourney...shits silly...
youre out round one like a wildcard team against philly...
^^^....average closer
pretty hard hitting verse here by schemer...

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