gotaasswhoopin4u
You got ya lil quotes in ya sig, but you aint doin shit on wax
When I drag you through the fuckin dirt is the only time you make tracks
good finish, original.
We have some similarities, both Degrassi fans, but kid
But we don't have nothing in Common,
...cept for the fact you'll be the next herb on his dick
this made no sense.
You rattin ass nigga, won't take shit for Gotta to hurt you
You be droppin more dimes than old Sprint commercials
again, nothing dope.
Wack sigs, gay name, follow trends, that's something I know about u
So of course when he lose, he gon' say, "IT WAS THE VOTING COUNCIL!!!"
good idea, but stretched.
Ya not hot, ya vet status is nothing to boast
who the fuck still be explainin punches after 1,000 posts?
good idea, almost good.
i gotta admit, this verse sucked, it needs some help
so if you can't beats, shut down your comp and kill yaself
your best line. ILL.

* your last bar, basically could be
my feedback for the verse. it was horrible.
but you had a few highlights. but overrall,
you needed some harder punches.

[b]high dro
you came in expectin a win, but this underdog is about to spoil it
people gon' see your "lines are shitty", like "long waits for the toilet"
ok, ill accept.
you won the first round but i didnt think rappin would suit ya
thas why you're gunna leave this "time" like Back to the Future
haha, ok.
fuck the rankings, heres an upset cuz today the best will prevail
cuz those numbers will turn around like when you step on a scale
what?
after only one look in "pop-eyes" i thought he was "chicken"
assumed i would no-show; "quick to skip" like droppin a discman
hot bar, but drop the quotations.
don't scratch tickets - you're battlin me, you ain't the luckiest
i know "pop aint sprayin", but look how "shook up" he is
good, but not hot.
when this shit's over, lotty will be mixed up in the E.R.
but fuck a lottERy, i'll make my money beatin this retard
uhh not so hot kid.

*ya opening lines were fire. had
some hot punches in there, and ya
had great flow. actually the flow was
hot throughout the entire verse, but the
punches began to die down. the intensity
of the lines in the verse got weaker.
but overrall, it was good.

vote: high dro

good verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph

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