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Old 08-08-08, 10:17 PM   #8
Lay.
don't try.
 
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From: Above you.
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what the fuck man i'm throwin stupid bars, you better trash this,
beat it and throw it to the curb, like i did your last bitch,

vs

nothing.


Veryy weak battle, LFS you didn't even have any good concepts..if you realize its an easy concepts its most likely played..but atleast you had an barelly okay line...which is mehish but in this battle it was the best bar. Sadly, but Ghost..ya need some work..your rhyme scheme was basic..your not really usin punches..kinda like statements.. the initial set up for a punch is..


Set up line..bla bla bla bla
state a concept, .. - flip it.

what you do is..

bla bla bla bla bla
bla bla bla bla bla..

v/ LFS ..ya'll need to step it up..See ya in a few weeks LFS
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