NICE HOOK SIMPLE BUT FALLOWS A GOOD READ AND MELLO TYO CRUNK FORMAT.
YOU ARE VERY SIMPLE IN DELIVERY AND ALSO FELL VERY REPETETIVE.ON SOME BARS YOU ABUSED SAME WORD RHYME.....ALSO YOUT THOUGHTS WERE SCATTERED FROM STREET LIFE TO RAP GAME IT MADE IT HARD TO CATCH YOUR RAW EMOTION,,,,,,,
YOU HAD SOME PEACES IN HERE WHERE YOU DID CATCH MY ATTENTION GOING INDEPTH TO RELATIVE MATERIAL AND I GIVE PROPS TO THAT BUT SADLY ALOT OF THE OTHER FLAWS SUBTRACTED FROM IT.
ALSO AND LASTLY THIS SITE TENDS TO SHUN GANGSTAS THUG LYRICS SO DONT BE DISSAPOINTED IF YUOU DONT GET ALOT OF LOVE JUST KNOW YOU ARENT HORRIBLE BUT YOU DO NEED TO ELIVATE SOME.
WORK ON IT YOU'LL GET ALOT BETTER AND IM SURE YOU WILL FIND YOUR BEST ANGLE.