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Old 07-18-06, 10:13 AM   #9
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Voted For: Raw King

Punches:Raw-King, its obvious he had more fluent harder hitting punches that where appealing and noticable.REX you had some okay stuff but really lacked the hard hitting stuff that you woulda needed againgst RAW.

Originality-Raw-king had some good creative stuff presented in his verse he came a lot harder then his opponent...some lines were weak...but some were pretty hard...only like 1 was played .......rex your shit was just like u were trying to be hard...but it didnt quite make sense..

structure-raw king...cuz i could pin point his punches and it made them mroe affecctive....rext yours punches were like delayed..cuz u had some spelling problems..and ur structure just threw the flow of ur verse off...gotta elevate.

over all i think raw king straight up took this.....rex you did your thing no doubt...just gotta get your spelling and flow down so the reader isnt confused...

raw nice job...

v/raw king

rtf if i ever have batttles open dog.
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