hook is ok.either the snare or bass is too high in the beat and sounds like its slightly panned to a side for some reason.your verse came in badly,too high and a little of snare.you missed a few places trying to force your flow in areas.lyrics are nice here.hook needs a little less effects on it.that fuck up sound in the beat is pissing me off i dont know what it is.wind?take that shit out and just use it in certain areas.take the effect off your voice also.this has potential but needs much better mixing on it.overall a good unfinished track.

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