Champ you are indeed but let me plant the first seed,
So what am i?? if your jus one of many bitches hanging off me like a necklace beed.
Well, these types of punches generally only work for me if the guy your insulting has been genuinely riding you and hanging on your words. So, yeah.. this wasn't good.
Kirk by name captain lonely by nature,
it's not your fault that peps dont rate ya,if you wonna be in with ya mates get a new avatar.
Nah, there is no real diss here. The second half to your punchline had to be flipped to make it a real punch, you didn't really do that.[./B]
You let me drop first so again you choose to follow rather then lead like a king,
i feel sorrow for you wanting to be part of me so i'l guide you under my wing.
[B]Again, the punch just isn't there.
I'l flip your lame ass ryhme scemes all over the shop your style is loaned,
but i like you so after this demolishion i'l pick u up just after i hold high the cup you once owned.
You are still only making statements.
So as it stands your favourite so im the challenger,
but i occupy the greatness tag and your jus along for the ride as passenger.
This was average at best, the wording was a little iffy.. but it is really the only punch you have thrown so far.
Im solid in this game and i'l show ya prevoking this joke,
you mimic washed up folk and now your just stuck in the middle like egg yolk.
This could barely be called a punch, it was weak in general though.
So these be lines 13/14 from where your hanging i cant be seen,
u roll with has beens now washed up better known as crack fiend's.
Nah, not liking this.
Your not needed in this life you couldnt get a clip on jeremy beadle,
So i give you this advice give up the crack and pick up the needle.
Nah, crack concept again.. weak.


VS.


Think you runnin' this but I'll Sonya. Actin' like a tyrant when the gay battles me,
But in this M-K match up. I'll fuckin' MASH this controller till it ends in a fatality,
The concept was raw, but the flip was a bit shit if I'm being honest.
Am I prepared? Well, I've repped Maryland since birth and my fires crushin' mic.'s,
So who needs practice, bitch? I've been walkin' all over MD my entire fuckin' life,
Decent name flip.
Can't rap for shit, you pedo faggot. Talkin' bout how your verses makin' girls wet,
What do you know about sweet 16s? Your bitch hasn't even celebrated hers yet,
Why does this concept seem oh so familiar??
You got crowds of 10 to 12 years olds yellin. All I can say is fuck, that's sad,
With them preteens yellin' "OH M...... GEE! How does he fuckin' suck that bad?!"
You got these punches on lock.. good shit.
Talkin' about avys and shit, bro. LAWL. I'd claim that you had that 05 style son,
But seriously, kid.... YOUR avatar is clearly where your style derived from,
Isn't this feeding, NAUGHTY!
And everybodies reppin' DBZ. Well, I'd hop on the bandwagon but it's a waste,
Who needs to rep it? When I've been dragon balls... all over your bitches face,
Ok, but I've used the dragon balls concept a long time ago.
And lmao at your sig..Bro, that easily tells me that you're a pure chump,
But guess what else means nothing without U? ......The word suck.
Lmao, this was hilarious.
You tiny little bitch. Its a waste of time even thinkin' this twig has got fans,
I'ma bail though. Cause I could smash a fuckin' stick playin' Rockband.
Nah, this was a weak closer.


Word to Kirk coasting again. He's loving shit right now, doesn't have to drop his hardest and he still wins comfortably. I should really vote against you because you sort of fed off his verse and that is just gay. But, oh well.. you clearly had the superior verse. Harder punches, better concepts and you basically had a higher level of consistency. I see that Meltdown has one major problem that he needs to work on, flipping punches. I think he has a grasp for concepts, but he is simply wording them into statements rather than flipping them into some raw punches. The best advice I can give is to read some verses by dudes like Kirk, Lay, myself and I'm sure there are other heads you could look up, like Mimesis.. he is raw at flipping punches. But yeah, read up and get an idea of how to flip punches nicely.. practice and work the flips into your concepts and you should see immediate improvement.

Vote: Kirk

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