Elooch and Marv had some alright verses. Sort of funny in places, and a lot harder hitting and just all around better then the others. About the rhyming thing... They rhyme when you say them, but not in text. Watch that ish. Looch your lines were a bit stretched. The other two... weak. You both should have came harder, cause you haev a few more battles until the tourny... but if you come like this, you'll only have a few more battles.
V/ Looch and Marv

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