wow this was a pretty lame battle.. neither came real hot... ughh Mista u definitely coulda came alot harder.. and ur still not listening to me about rhyme scheme.. its really lacking.. u got iight vocab, iiight imagery. but emotion was pretty bad..

Given Light your verse i thought had a little more edge to it... u came a bit harder on the vocab, your emotion also needed some work.. you had iight imagery... but overall i think you emotion and imagery were a bit better... given you the win


V/Given Light...

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