Werdness. .
Realist outshone on this collab, he's working internals and multi's into his verses, keeping the flow short and to the point, holding the readers attentions, keeping to the topic nicely, all he really needs is some orignal thought-provoking lines, a strong writers voice, a slightly better word choice and a topic he that comes from his heart - then he'll be a pretty decent topical writer.

Titan's verse really lacked, the internals were there but they were basic, the lines had horrible structure and thats what threw the flow wto that verse as i read it. Overall though a decent topic, both could use more imagery and emotion in there pieces but still, elevation is the key.

Eace-Pay!

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