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Old 01-08-05, 03:25 PM   #15
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Are More Doper Than Bobby Brown's Nose//<<<<best line in the first verse, other than that the verse was extra trash, illogic you gotta work on your structure ya bars be way too long when you drag em out like that it takes the effectiveness out of it, i was sittin here tryna rap the shit to myself and was gettin mad like damn this would be an iight verse if the bars weren't so long that shit killed it for me it had no flow to it half of it aint even rhyme

premenation there where no real faults in your verse, no real highlights either but it got the job done, so it's obvious who i'm pickin on this one

vote= premenition
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