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Old 05-08-08, 10:44 PM   #13
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Voted For: Lay Fear

Your a known dick rider..an all the traits are evident
cuz F. DR so much...we startin to confuse him with the president creative, 7/10
I'm endin it..fraud is all about deceit when he's compared n tried
cuz it'll be hard to shake off the rust..when your whole style is a Para'lies decent metaphore,6/10
I ain't afraid..you ain't bossin this vet, n it'll be costin you yet
cuz ever since my days in high school.....I been easily tossin my F's decent 4/10
you lost in text..fraud,..your coverin up talent?..I'll tackle this
cuz only thing you disguisin about your text skill....is your lack of it. liked the wordplay 6/10
Okay whale, fat bitch is done..n his strategy may fail
cuz I'm puttin an end to F..like I'm against the fuckin grade scale creative 6/10..............................
murda
your verse i felt like you were just rambling
i felt your only good line was the mentore one and i didnt think it was that good.
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