What's hot:

1 Vocab
2 energy on track
3 some rhyme patterns


What needs work:

1 Flow lacked continuity
2 Exactly what were u rapping about?


Overall: This was a slick sounding track that lacked direction...You were more concerned, it seemed, with dropping complex multis than establishing a continuity in the flow...It sounded complex but didn't connect to mean much


Solid...but could have been better


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RTF for fuckin Christ's sake...on my song MAN, WOMAN, CHILD...I think I got 1 reply and 100000 views...So, if u will..

geesh

fucking

geesh