it'z cool & evathang but u have 2 formulate more ideas then just that 1 thang elaborate tell us y u hate these thangz cuz nebody can say "I hate this life" "I hate my wife" "I hate the fact that i have 2 c her azz again 2nite" come on now i know u got it inside ya step ur wordplay 4 the next piece overall i've give it 6.5/10 for effort