personify:
(1)triple n wut u gotta realize even in these lives, punchin ya rhymes doesnt mean that u can "master punchlines"
^^ehh decent 5/10
(2)theres "no name needed" to describe wut this "queen" has done, calls people herb but he "bitches" in the wrong forum
^^ wack 3/10
(3)the king has come back just to be decrowned, a "cold welcome" meal was all this "dawg" has found
ehh.. OK 4/10
(4)when he spits he really gives out a "deranged code", said he wuz gone for tourin? it wuz just a trip on the road!
ur best bar so far 7/10
(5)calls himself a king, but hes just the queen, which means its reversed hes the son and im the real daddy.
doesnt rhyme 1/10
(6)now includin the mom may sound herbish to many, but really the herbs r those who think NNN is the best of RV.
wack 3/10
(7)he's here one day and said he wuz the best, well there are 19 people that u just couldnt put to rest.
decent 4/10
(8)offered to help me cuz he though i wuz dry, least hes honest when he said that if he did he would "commit suicide"
i guess thats a personal lol not sure tho 6/10
(9)he leaves people "black and blue" but it aint skill from his rhymes, theres so much wackness, skill is the last thing that enters their minds.
decent wordplay 5/10
(10)4 days after xmas he gets his 21st birthday, he gets an elimnation, dont u just love these holidays?
wack + fake personal 2/10
(11)gonna drink egg nog and try to "beat some teens", scarin little kids in the only way he can get some "candy."
wtf doesnt rhyme and its wack -5/10.. AND YES THAT IS NEGATIVE 5
(12)many said hed win, well thats 2 million lost, apparantly he had to save up the money before he could pay this "cost"
wtf ? 2/10
overall: 37/120 (31%)
and your verse was 12 bars not 12 lines
triple_N:
Am I racist? for hatin' da many faces dis kid places
His wackness is sickenin'..........
.....only good characters in his verses is da spaces
^^decent opener 6/10
Wackness is in his DNA, so from its rules he can't stray
Elevation's like his name change, went from wack to played
^^decent personal 6/10
He's indicated he's frustrated an its causin him dismay
Cuz he gets no respect...........
.....he's as celebrated as a jehovah witness's birthday
^^good meta wack punch 6/10
Your ego's overblown if you think u topplin' my throne
I got fans, ya "disc" wouldn't get spins on a rodery phone
^^finally a dope bar in this battle 8/10
Your battles are ignored by not one, but da whole board
You spit all ya verses in ya room.........
............................& even ya place rugs aren't "floored"
^^decent bar 6/10
This like da presidency has two slots, an your playin' keri
Ya nothin', only time your "above the rest" is at cemetaries
^^set up wack punch wack wack closer 4/10
overall : 36/60 (60%)
vote: triple_N
it's pitiful when triple_N used 6 less bars and only had one less point
