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Old 03-02-06, 06:29 PM   #6
Triple_N
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ok first verse...got a decent flow but the voice has very little emotion...if he had sum more emotion it woulda been koo, lyrics wasn't bad....hook was decent if ya had made it wetter an had sum addlibs supporting it, you woulda been koo...ok 2nd verse, flow was koo but u held same flow a bit too long...but u did change it up...an delivery was better than first, lyrics was ok....3rd verse was same as 1st verse but it had a lil more energy...overall it was a good track that could use sum touching up but def a decent listen....stay up........1
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