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Old 08-01-04, 06:13 PM   #12
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Voted For: MARVOLoUsJ1009

omg this nigga just annaliated that bitch fo real and i aint saying that cuz i dont like the slit i vote fairly.
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man all your pucnhes were weak and aint hit hard and your personals were weak also.your flow and structure was good and your vocab is the same you also had a good ender6/10 and a good opener 5/10.now let me tell you why you lost.
marv
flow snd structure good vocab also your wordplay was flawless
1st bar powerful hit 8/10
2nd bar also hard 8/10
3rd and 4th ber hard hitting personals same with the 5th bar
9/10
your ending needs work but otherwise you locked this
vote -marv better personals and punches
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