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Old 11-15-05, 07:52 PM   #9
allik war
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[QUOTE=T-Dot]Voted For: Cdusit

allik war:
excuse me son u think this daycare,
u knew 2 da game nigga i dont care,
No Punch - 1/10
jus spit yo 16 nigga n challenge if u dare,
so if ya in da wrong room please exit there//
NO - 2/10
i shatter punchlinewhen i push up when its crunch time,
i give lines meaning n life but through my pain n strife,
ya soon 2 be wife and dis game is mine,
my system of words blocks competition,
like ya corner gas station atm reciept reads declined,
im inclined,2 b on da grind//
OK - 3/10 Didnt Rhyme - 1/10 (good thing this was all 2getha so i did rhyme.......)

spittin venemous verses,leavin ya cursin,
go beserk,while im jerkin ya girls bra strap,stop put down da gun son rememba this only rap//
BaD - 1/10
11/60

no seriously,its not dat serious its flow,i know ya gettin delirious,im fearless,but by da end evryone on here but u will b tearless!//
MEH - 2/10 You didnt really have wordplay or strong punches, work on more creative shit, and a bigger vocab.[QUOTE]

Vote - Cd

i knoiw this wasnt 1 of my best but damn i at least rhymed all da way through da damn thing oh well uppin 4 votes n people please learn how 2 read if u gonna judge a battle ty:
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