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Old 07-29-08, 10:06 AM   #7
LPMNDCTE
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Lil Wayne

I serve emcees, cause im on the rise like mercury
Homie know i bring the pain but actin like he never hurt of me
Forced concept (hurt/heard)

And thas why im determinedly merkin C...
Always postin pics with your broom, so i guess you deserve this sweep
Broom/sweep wordplay is played

You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick
DOPE

Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order
for & or-der really dont rhyme man... should have used something like for,-sir to rhyme with or-der to get the ryhming
schema together

I heard 90210 was back, prolly cause CALI's out of jail
but watch the show get cancelled... when this fat fag steps off the scale
ehh????



C.A.L.I.
This cowards so scared he changed his name then asked me to battle
He'll never elevate above me like climbing on smashed ladders
lad-der & bat-tle do not rhyme

Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit
Dope cuz Lil Wayne actually kissed Birdman on stage

Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um
descent..good follow through on the punch

Number one stunna been on my pipe like a plumber
He too broke to get gassed and every punchline is a hummer
Ehhh...


The told him so cuz hes low on the totem pole like his postcount
Lay-Fear make sure you take all his other names votes out
the wording is very bad on this man...



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When it comes down to the wire, the punches that stood out in this battle are:

Lil Waynes a homo he kisses grown men on the lips
All hos swallow so theres no fucking chance he can spit


Bitch yous a snitch and i aint talking bout rhyming
Drop a few bars here and there but you put more people behind um

verses

You just a herb to me, you're a swollen fat prick
So instead of draggin this out, i'll just smoke him right quick


Like shit! I was thinkin, what the Fuck does CALI stand for?
Nothin. He's always sittin his fat ass down waitin to order




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Vote - C.A.L.I. for having a slightly better worded diss / punch, but both yall need improvement on the rhyme schema
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