U couldn't spit Clean if you was usin Listerine

Ok Dat Line is played out like a mufucka but it's actually better than any line u posted in dat verse up there
Try bein more creative with punchlines!!!!
Dont do no simple shit like

I slize you from the dick up to the head/
cause you're dumb and wack/
but now I squash that shit/
anyway you're not able to beat it/

I mean wat da fuck iz dat??!!!!
in those 4 LITTLE lines you used 4 LITTLE WORDZ and didn't even RHYME!!!
head,wack,shit,and beat it

atleast use werdz dat a 1st grader isn't able to use

Try usin multies 2
becuz when you use multies it makes your verse look more attractive and it also improves your FLOW!!


aight man
~`UnO`~