Ok I have a dilema with this one. Both dropped pretty decently, not amazing but decent. I had problems with both of your layouts though. WillNova had that gay /// and txt spelling thing going and Sense's lines were very stretched at times. Sense probably had a better concept for his topic but as in many cases, the execution was lacking. The last line of his verse was really nice though.

'An Ex Murderer, These Shadows Of A Past That I Let Go, Now Priest In God's Graces,
It's Unheard Of But I Accomplished Reviving This Dead Soul,
Only To Live In A Shadow Of My Victim's Faces....'

^If your whole verse was like that you'd have walked away with this. But the middle of your verse was pretty boring to be honest and I had to force myself to read on. Will used lots of multies which does make a piece more readable, if it's not full of imagery and metaphors. His vocablarly was also better and if he had used proper spelling and a good layout he would have walked away with this also. As it was I'd say WillNova's was a more interesting read, as the middle of Sense's verse let him down.

V/ WillNova