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Old 10-10-04, 10:31 AM   #6
Abraxas
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ummm.. better verse is sshema....
Smeha: you prolly took very loong to make that.... im guessing you prewrote.. but i ono.. you had very strong punches and nice personals... also ya strucutre was very g ood and ya flow good.. punches were not as gooda at some places..........but you did reall good.....

NOst : you really didnt try at alll but you had some strong punches and nice personals too streched but ya structre was not that good and it flow iiight......looks like ya keyes ya shit..

vote Shema
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