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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
From: ATL..still reppin' NYC |
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damn.... kinda catchy.... versus are straight.... especially the beginning of the second verse.... thought the hook was aliittle plain until ya got to the "waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait a minute....." part... it livened it up.... one thing i would say to work on or touch up a bit is that little melody type singing thing you did in the second verse.... make it more melodic so that it blends in better with the verse... good shyt
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