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Old 10-31-04, 11:50 AM   #12
Abraxas
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Changed the name. Now we think your some champion-right?
Wrong, not wit-in ya sight. Ur just another Phantom-hyped.
this was ok.. i didnt like it as an opener though
Hit the light's. This kid's livin in the dark, thinken he got spark
Reppin crew's, but like your sig...A "eye" don't even fit the part...
this was iight.....
Like ur stuck in park, Rate's. Ur not pullin the right gears in here-
They ain't gon' cheer....Soc u want Fan's? You better go to Sears.
LO.. this was a good punch.....nice flow...
Fuk spittin....or hackin.....I don't need your IP adress...
I'll rip thru pixel's, Grip ya neck and leave your box voiceless
the rhyme sheme was weak but it was a good one
Make you confess...This image you make..It's not what you are...
This South Kali Killa aint even old enuff to legally drive a car......
no.... fuck this.. not a good persnoal
So....

Forget the belt's, If your a champ,....Than to win's insult....
And remember this...your only here because you MOD yourself....
wtf???? not a good one...
Scarred wit welt's, Soc I'm playin...I never meant for ur pain.
But it aint like ur checkin. We never met. You jus saw my name.
this was an ok closer

overall... your verse was kinda wea.. i saw better from you.. ya flo was iight.... some punches were iight no very direct punches.... you had allot of multis put ther... that was good...

It's "ooo"s and "ahh"s as soon as Soc steps in the faction
Compared to me,the -OH's you get only qualify as basic reactions!
not a good opening....
Really, compared to you, Soc's a fuckin legend, im the hoods star
While the only hood youve ever been to,was at the front of your car!
nice punch.... flow was iight....
The shit you spit is boring, gives everyone of us a snore
You used to know better...........but you and I dont talk anymore!
no... it was very weak.....
We know Vanilla Ice's reincarnation, is uglier and even more slow
So just make ya lyrics how ya "Pixar".........not "Finding Nemo"!
LOL... this was funny.. but not that good....
Usually in this type of situation, kid would run away he aint a fool
But when he saw he was facin me, he shoulda "Jet" times 2!
nice concpet in this personal but i thought you needed rewording in the other line
This bitch is wrecked imma conclude your entire career
Why did i vote for you every round? for an easy win when i got here!
no... this was kinda glorified... i didnt feel this one... bad closer..

overall... you hit hard with your personals and it was good.... you had ok flow

both of you had kinda weak verses.. ive seen better...

VOte: Carson for stronger punches... and good flow

Carson: 7.7/10
Socrates: 7.58/10
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