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Old 12-20-04, 05:05 PM   #6
JPoll
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i was thinking this would be the battle of the week...lets see

Soc first:

Damn, so this herbs signature says he can see the future coming
So shit, I wouldnt blame him for thinkin its bright after this sunning
8 haha, pretty decent, simple word play, decent concept
Punchline champ?You're MW and i'm HW, so you live in my shadow
So everyone watch while I merk P harder then heads from rapbattles
9 another good one, gay how you suck up in battles, but still a funny ass concept
It's over son, you gunna have to take whether or not you hate it
You win? Shit you couldnt even properly spell the word "favorite"!
7.5 blah, decent, i like it, just something about the wording to me
Plus it was always destiny for you to lose, its quite easy to see
When even the leader of your crew admitted he lost a battle to me
7 that was bad, leaders aren't always the best on a side note, but this was just such a simple punch that i didn't like it at all reallly
So why should you even try?Well I bet I know what you are craving
I can bet my bottom dollar.....that its even more than ya life savings!
6.5 wow that's played, and not even really a punch...you are better then this punch soc...
Its done,over,abolished, either way you put it, ya just been smacked
So Prem takes the cake.........cuz he damn sure aint takin this match
9 haha, that's a nice concept, i've heard an off shoot of this, but never worded this well, i liked this punch alot


now Prems Breakdown

Soc ya like your sig, its easy to take an eye off you...
Flow's prediction was off, realised, now he flied off too...
8.5 haha, pretty decetn good stuff...so true...where's flow? haah
Greedy?, Only here for the money but I’ll take this freebie…
Not confident, you’d ‘bet’ on me but you’d get ‘Id’d’ G…(15)
7 blah at best...lalalallallal
“seems A.I just takin too long”, or sampled a Socrates scripture…(*)
Damn! Give u tracing paper and u still don’t ‘get the picture’…
8.5 haha, good concept, wording could have been better, but good stuff
You’d av bin in the RV dreamteam but theres a veteran clause…
Even if u ‘shit on my writtens’, they’d still be beta than yours…
7 wow, that wasn't really a good or a decent punch, the set up line could have been made into a better punch
Lyricist Lounge? Fuckin freeposting, take down them feet…
Dawg you never ‘boil over’ so its clear your easy to ‘beat’…(egg)
9.5 wholy shit son, fucking sick concept, nice wording also, good shit
U in the ‘shadows’, bitch set an appointment wiv the doctor…
Socrates your done, ain’t nothin but a ‘phantom’ in this ‘opera’…
8 well hmm the thing with that is that the phantom plays a big role in those operas, anyways, i know what you were trying to say and it is a farily decent punch, good shit


Socrates=47
Premanition=48.5

VOTE Premanition

good battle to both of you, I thought it was going to be a little bit better, but still good stuff...
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