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Old 05-10-05, 03:54 PM   #14
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lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
GOOD CONCEPT...COULDVE BEEN WRITTEN BETTER...6/10
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope
PLAYED CONCEPT...3/10
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
NICE...8/10
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
NOT REALLY...EFfective...4/10
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
LOL...7/10
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
GOOD PERSONAL...6/10

IM NOT VOTIN ON THE OTHER BAR BECUZ FLOW SAID 12 LINES AND U DID 14.....

OVERALL-34/60

INVEKTIVE

it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
GOOD....6/10
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
NOT FEELIN IT...4/10
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
PLAYED CONCEPT...3/10
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
NNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOO...0/10
Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
EHHHH...3/10
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause.............................
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
BLAH...5/10

OVERALL-21/60

V/MARVJAY
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