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Old 05-10-05, 04:59 PM   #15
diman
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marv
lol u back again?,i could c our battle aint leave dis kid shook.
but da day u 'Da-FEET' me ppl a start 2 believe in "big-FOOT".
decent open.
prick look!...u been here for a while now still aint got hot quote.
invek's a "clumbsy drug dealer" datz only way he'll "drop-dope".
played.
ya moms is whut u call a junkie,fam stop u get more wack & borin monthly.
i cant lose so if they say "your-up" they talkin bout da "foreign country".
good way to stay in depth.
IN-vektive ya punches r IN-effective u IN-active..whuts goten IN-to you?
ur IN-sane u neva been IN- da booth fukk rap look 4 a job IN-terview.
good idea, bad finish.
ya parents shouldn't of had IN-tercourse,as a noob u was spittin recless.
till U GOT KOED By ME,and did like a "shy dj" and "hide ya record".
ok, i'll take it.
started doin audio's now u focus rite?,nope asshole u aint close 2 nice.
invektive ya 'LP wont work'..n why? u name dat shit a "a BROKEN MiC".*
no.
invektive a thug? nah he's pussy rv u'll find dis head shook in da house.
i dont mean "the ENERGy DRiNK" but u stay with "RED BULL in ya mouth".
haha. good.

*aight, verse was 40-50. most of ya
bars were good, well over decent, had
some comedy in them. some bars just
didnt cut it. but overrall you had a good
verse.

invektive

it may be coincidence...but i think your sig holds a true meaning
Nas holds that number up 4 a reason...its the round your leaving
good way to include the sig. thats a must
he's been texting for years...Marvin's cartoon seems fact now
he never spits over a beat...the martians mouth is blacked out
what?
Marv's verses put me to sleep..his text is my therapy meditator
in rap...your going nowhere...like putting Slinky's on Escalators
ok, had some depth.
son, your not on my level...your garbage; clearly seein defeat
and you couldnt get caught up, even if u put Usher's CD on repeat
why would he want to be caught up?
good punch, but how does this apply? FILLER.

Marv left TE in search to command..but he was put to silence
how can you be the general of a crew...when u have no privates?
decent.
your ranked higher...but we all know Goliath has just got to fall
cause
your chances are like "9's blastin Shaq"..u dont have a "shot a tall"
aight, good finish.

*verse was decent, you came with good
punches and bad ones. you had good
flow the entire verse, which is a plus.
i liked ya style, but a few of ya bars were
simply fillers. so im gonna have to give it
to marv.


vote: marv

good verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph
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