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Old 12-12-05, 04:50 PM   #9
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I liked both pieces really, they were both raw. Unfortunately i can only vote for one

Max Mcfly. & Crazy Hades: I liked you guys' piece but I couldn't say i was really feelin it to the degree of time standing still. I'll give you guys this though, certain lines did give me the chills like

and the morgue was the background of the diseased and hurt...
with so many diseased...Time Stood Still...though clocks still worked.


The Revelation & DramaQueen: I felt this piece slightly more, time standing still, i had the imagery goin in my head of the war and i could picture something like a missle going off, and even after the poem was over i could see the end. I could see the missle falling out of the sky and right before it hits the ground time slows down like the matrix. Then its over in a flash. I had quotes in the other verse but this is the one i loved out of the entire battle.

The government isn't truthfull to us, they withhold information on purpose,
What doesn't kill us may make us stronger, but it will always hurts us.

good battle

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