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Old 03-02-09, 08:09 PM   #6
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lmao. this battle was a little weird honestly.


Adam, you shit was alright man. like you hit the theme well, but nothing
was really that strong. Like this wasn't personal song .vs personal song
feel me. You needed to make it more like a battle verse...against Yo Momma
that singin shit wasn't bad. like you def got a good voice, and if thats the
way you want to go about posting your verses. thats cool, by all means go
with that. But just keep in mind, that its not always about just writing to the theme
you still got to focus on punches and hitting your opponent. for whatever they are that week.


bronze- at first i was just like what the fuck?? i mean it wasn't rhyming, flow was off.
and you actually started out dissing yo momma..when you were supposed to be dissing prank'd....but then like after it clicked off and came back on....it as just like it looked. You just started over, with something fresh. Started hitting a lil more, started dissing prank'd. you looked hilarious, so that helped lol. I like that little touch, overall i think u had like 1 or 2 funny lines, the rest was blah.

not bad battle though guys, i think im gon have to give this to Bronze though.

slightly caught it
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