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Old 05-25-05, 08:15 PM   #12
Viva
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yeah this was heavy stuff!! lol i dont really read all the open mics as much but im glad i read this! lots of tight vocabulary and very nice original lines from both! i preferred atticus's second verse as i feel it flowed better as the first one was more poetic! OSB jus killed it! lol, this is one of the best om's i've read so far!
Bottle up my firing emotions and when the molten builds,
One day they explode, flaming, burning, igniting the fuse,
fighting the fueds within myself, i'm frightened to choose,
^^these were my favourite lines from OSB, i dont no y, i suppose we all can identify with those feelins and i liked the way he described them

Lavish Covers Tucked Under-Over Realities Blacklist At The Back Misunder-
Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's"
^^favourite lines from Atticus, lol this was deep man keep this up! u 2 should collab more often both of ur styles worked well together as atticus's was more poetry based and complex, OSB jus came wit it n hit hard n used simpler but effective vocabulary! Thats my opinion anyway!
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