yo aight battle

------write mind verse----

IP: 3273 E58A


I love beating hoes...after I love 'em...and me and O have been through the mak
This bitch can Duck me all she wants...it proves she's qWack
I aint sexist...so you can retract my earlier statment
right after I cut this rose.....and crack the pavement
Hoes usually get Me up....but watch this bitch put her hands high
"Wr!te..you just can't rob a slut online.." ...........O...Can't I?
Losing just an action and I'm gon' spray this bitch with verbs
My text is fucked....and O is hanging on my words
O i'll stop now just meet your demands and your wishes
but I got a question?
If your here battling me...who the fuk is washing dishes?

alote of pounches and personals but they weren't to hard you could work on your structure and flow
good wordplay

----Ocanti verse---

DISHES?...let me find out you're not the one that's in the kitchen
I'm still washin the sheets from ya middle of the night pissin
Listen...Oh! what you thought I could'nt flip it/rhymes stay exquisite flows from the entrance-intense
u left fumes that went to war with insense
u're a rap horror/8 mile ac-tor
u would never beat me/cuz I'll leave you on your act floor wit yo back torn
you can get on RB and front if you want to
you'll be sleeping at your moms/ and yo hand will be fuckin u
clip this rose /you'll be investin in the birth of a merker
you crack any more pavement/ and you're going to be one less construction worker

better overall verse with harder pounches and personals metas and wordplay

nice spiting

------------------vote goes to Ocanti-----------------

vot on battles in my sig i took the time