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*i initially voted on this battle & it hasnt shown up.
so i will only post the feedback, not the line-by-line
analysys.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Wet Willy

I hear you in construction now…working, earnin that hard cash
CALI's real life elevation equals his flows..burgers to hard hats
I laugh at your audios…You actually think you supply the heat??
Cali can ''stick veggies between his cheeks''..n still couldn't ''ride a beat''
RV kids say CALI's phat...but theyre talkin bout whats under his bare skin.
Duke, as far as punches go..you dont "throw shit" like chimps with impared limbs
Should be banned...lost a pink slip battle…i guess your lifes through
Sonned by Lay-Text..sorry, but this time the condom ripped YOU
TheREALCalisHere?..Somebody please give this nerd a clue
40 posts a day…we don't need REAL in your name to confirm its you
CALI's from NY? ComptoN and BrooklyN DO relate, it's NOT fiction
Triple the last letters = the only person who made 'Cold Outside' worth a listen

*this verse was real well structured,
the flow as hot, the lines were fire, you came
with evidential punches, concluding in
solid bars. hot verse.

Quote:

Originally Posted by C.A.L.I

When our 'Mindz Kollide' your verse equals retarded patients
All flow no elevation ya barz like water in basements

Punches like drunken fighters thrown but way off of they aim
Ya shit sucks got the same chance going up as a crashed plane
You ass lame but hold on a minute im link tossing
How you dickride stay on 'Flow' like broken sink facuets

Think he 'dope' cuz his dad did coke?...but he sniffed them lines
So you aint shit only considered gifted round Christmas time
Watching for stolen rhymes ya crew was just u and a biter
He 'KEN/can' not see a dope punch unless we talking bout street fighter
Get your 'Ghostwriters' tell um when they drop to give it they best
Cuz when it comes to being a herb you defintly 'BIgger Then The Rest'

*verse was good, it wasnt super.
you had some good punches and some
lines which i felt were fillers. but all in all
it was still a good verse. im sure youll do
well in the tourney.

vote: wet willy

dope verses yall, good luck to both.

-eph