Ya mom massages my nuts
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I liked the beat....it was a beat geared toward a vocalist with a vocie dat can carry a beat an ya voice is strong enough to carry it...lyrically u came hard....nice word play...that closer was a monster....you flowed nice throughout...ya delivery was a lil on the baln side tho but that was really only negative....your quality has greatly improved....some of ya dubs seemed a lil off...the sample on the hook fit wit lyrics nicely...u wrote to this beat perfectly....I think u coulda used some more addlibs tho....but not a biggie...overall track is good as is but could use some touching up...so I give it a 8/10
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