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Old 07-29-04, 12:43 PM   #11
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You're so ugly, the closest you've been to havin' sex is wit yo lotion
It isn't the poetry, it's yo "skill", that makes you "cum" in slow motion
LOL this shit was funny
Yea, you posted up yo pic, then you said it wasn't tru
We all kno why you posted it, cuz you wished that dude was you
nice....
This wigga goes around sayin' "nigga", cuz he really wish he was black
Man, get of the crack, you're wack and a racist, even you kno it's a fact
decent
We all kno why you left original, cuz this bitch got hated
Again you prove yo gayness, by havin' the alias, Dick Tated
lol decent
But I'm not the only one, even Vets agree wit what I say
TripleN4554: LMFAO. I thought apothesis was really gay
OO...lol ok
So you call me overrated, lol, ok, if that's what you wish to flaunt
This RB Queen is jealous... it's my dickriders he really want
I though you said you didnt have any?..lol decent
But I don't have a single one, cuz to win... I don't need them
You couldn't come in FIRST, if you replaced Adam in Eden
LOL...1st line ok 2nd nice
We all kno England is fucked, I mean chips are fries, and fries are chips
You prolly like the hot dogs the most, cuz they so skinny, they look like dicks
ummm....kinda gay
Oh, you wanna see me brag? I'M NUMBER ONE!!! I hope this helps
I could still merk yo ass... while makin' fun of myself
lol wtf at that pic....decent
You can call me a 'mUmma's boy", but I'll still rip you into pieces
I'll merk yo ass so bad. Now that's a fact, not jus my Thesis
alright

*After finishin' off the fag, he moves onto Polifick*

I can tell by ya pic that you are a severe sufferer of the munchies
Cuz you got enough fat in ya cheeks, to feed 10 thirdworld countries
this was hot...good personal
If you get a girl, kissin' you wit their eyes closed is the only way they should
Considerin' yo ugly face... that's the only way they could
umm not feelin it
Don't say you from the hood, cuz you ugly, and rap like shit
I beat you, but you got a tie... cuz niggas were ridin' yo dick
lol ok
Rip a shit, lick a dick, wit rick a hick a that
Your verse is like the line above... completely WACK!!!
1st line is Gay but a setup..ok

*Decides to wrap this shit up*

Polifick shoves his dick up Apo's ass, cuz it makes Apo feel cushy
Then he shoves it down Apo's mouth, cuz it's the closest he'll get to pussy
ha ha....good
Both of y'all got here cheaply. A no show, and a dick ride
If I told y'all to kill everyone who hated you, it wouldn't be murder, it'd be genocide
stretched but decent

good drop had a lot of persoals..some of your punches could've
been better


overall:7.5/10


Apotheosis

Gonna kill this fake G…it’s the purpose of this thread,
Coz he aint on the block…unlike the shape of his head.
LMFAO..Dope shit
Arsehole sized mouth, perhaps why you talk shit,
& kid how can u top me??? When ya got no top lip.
Lol nice
Your style is shitty bitch & no way is it evolving,
It must suck posting a piece….that ur 2 wack 2 be involved in.
This was good
Dropping wide ass bars that don’t shine like mine,
Ima leave u spaced out…like ur brows 2 ur hairline.
decent
Fuck that gangster tip, ur a NO LIMIT RECORD lame,
The only bricks u got….is to help build the wall of shame.
Alright this was decent
As for limited edition, he aint got no type of limp,
But rollin with Polifick means he runs with a gimp.
decent
& your know for sick fetishes…you & ur dad are horny,
coz u2 run tags with a bitch like Mask with the tourney.
LOL….
Im iller than both of u, & face it u cant handle this,
Because Pol if u truly are the king of RB…………..
…………………….THEN WE ARE ALL ANARCHISTS’
Decent right here
Got an interbreeding culture, that must have brain damage,
& you can relate to me…but there’s no need for an arranged marriage.
LMAO…Personal right here nice
Nose sticks out like BOOM, outta proportion is all I’ll say,
Coz we can go toe to toe…providing u look the other way.
Ha ha…good
Plus you got a ruff complexion, whats that lip skin about?
& I don’t mean u & polis games…………………………………
..………………..when I say you got black around ya mouth.
Lol..decent
Poor in a few different ways, but whats even worse,
Within two months…ur broke arse aint got a new shirt.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=120388
^April
http://img56.photobucket.com/albums...88/SPuL_003.jpg
^June
LOL damn..personal
Only in battles ugly boy, are you ever due a date,
So keep fuckin ur sneakers, in attempts of a soul mate.
Nah not feelin this one
I hate fags like u & flash, ima leave you homo’s hanging
SPuL would suit the swat team…………………………………..
………………..……………coz he be known for flash banging.
Lol nice wordplay
That pic of me was a joke, & if im gay coz I made it,
What the fuck are you…coz its gone…so u musta saved it.
Lol decent
This Pakistani is bred tuff, but ima leave ya throat red,
you aint the type 2 throw in the towel….………………….
………………………………………so I slapped it off ya head.
Lmao…..Lmao…nice



Nice witty verse solid punches nice personals tight verse….I was laughing
All throughout..


Overall:8.5

Polifick

Can Go All Day How Wack U Are Freak.. But Yo verse Is My Summary...
Punches Are Weak.. Like The Present Muhammad Ali.. Missin Stunningly ...
Lol nice
Tie Sand Bags Round His Waiste...Still Wouldnt Be Heavy Weight...
Wouldnt Be Off the Chain If He Was Tubman Running On Escape...
Lol…good
Must Be Drunk When You Write Verses Flow Is Disorderly....
Worster Than White Chicks..In Scary Flicks...You Die So Horribly..
Lol good
Racist Bitch...In This Battle You Not Goin Beat Blacks...
Reason Poetry In motion..It Goes Down It Gets No feedbacks...
Nice personal
Throws The Pin And Holds The Grenade;Thats How He'll lose the fight...
Poet not Battle write;or use the mic;D/R DeadlyVisons Bruise Your Sight......
Drop The Foolish Hype" Russell Simmons Left.. I Won't Have You 'looking right"...
These were decent could have been better
Wrap Up Your Mic Cords...Verse Leaves Bored..Godly??You Not Even Lords...
Far From The Best..0 Votes Scored..Your Like A King In Chess..Last-On The-Board..
alright
Bowin 2 Me Like His Ava..T..Ar...If You Was Jack And Tiger 2 Gether Still Wouldnt Par...
Like Monkey Murdering Yo Bars...Can Be Janets Nipple,Still Wouldnt Be A Graduated Star...
Decent but stretched

Wins 1 Tourney..Now His D/Riders Sayin He Over-Rated...
Vango puttin Batteries In Yo Back ..The Reason You Mo2Va8ted...
LMAO…Personal some people might not get it…Damn.nice
If Rap Was A S.A.T He A Be Like Marion Jones Steeriods Far From Passin.....
D/R LLoyd Banks Instead Of Hunger 4 More Spuls More Of Non Fasteing....
Decent metas nice punch
Nursery Rhymes;I'll Put An End To Your Lines''Like Disconnecting The Phone..
You Spitting Foam;Treat You Like Games In Toronto;Split Open Your Dome..
Lol decent bar
Like Getting Sucked Into Airplane Propellers;Ill Have My 'fans' Merk You...
Lost a Hurt u....Sideline Then Get Rid Of You..So Im Garrison Hearst You....
Hmm…could of done better nice concept though
Verse Look Like You Typed In A Hury..Win Is A Blury..Lyrics Far From Worthy..
Bitin His Nails Got Him Worried...Lryics Is Fake Just Like His Mike Bibby Jersey..
Lol nice personal…
Suppose 2 Be Nike Shit Is Reebock..Please Stop..Sending U Away Like Diviac..
Mommis Boy...Eatin Vegatables Like She Say Only Way His Beats Hott..(Beets)
Nice multis good bar…
Im In The Ship But Who Im facing?I Dont Kno Is It Time Or Rhymes Im waisting..
Cuz This Battle You Like Mugsy Bouges Blazing.. You Wont Rise To The Occasion..
Decent strechted
Have Him Trippin Again"Kickin The Can" Like Poor Kids Playin Soccer Lately..
Let Yo Mom come Home And See You On The Net..Its Peace...Maybe...
Ha ha ha nice personal….


Good drop some lines were stretched but decent others were like damn..lol

Overall:7.6

Good battle…props to all

v/Apotheosis
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