Odi et Amo
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Voted For: Butters
.Fatal Lyricist.
Listen lil nigga u cood catch 2 thru ya vest........
U just a fan wit ma name tattooed on ya chest.........
^weak opener
Im truly da best, u a pup tonite......
N wit a name like Butters u must be white..........
^no punch
Dis nigga saw ma verse n he ran for help.........
N u think u hot, but if i put in a pan u'll melt............
^doesn't do trick
Seriously kid ya nutz, i'll leave ya throat cut.........
Take away the e.r.s in ya name cuz nigga u butt....
^decent
I'll puncture y alungs just for fun homie ya done....
U claim u nice but elevate, cuz u jus joined dis month 1.......
^nope...
Weak verse, no real hardhitting punches or personals whatsoever. Vocab was basic, structure n flow were okay though. Keep on battling and read other battles cause you gotta improve your punches and such...
.Zer0
Fatal who? your not legendary, i mean pssh look at ya rec...
Pushing paper huh?...dont mean you can handle & master the text...
^decent opener
Check yaself brother..cos you bout to be dropped, & dismembered...
Lopsided battle...ill leave fatal in the shade..more than his avys rendered...
^okay
Picked on this noob, but you got the wrong end of the stick...
You set this battle not knowing my skill, Cos ill literally step on ya clique...
^not feelin it
I stand firm, throw ya punch's at me kid...cos they just get deflected...
But fatal claimed he was ill....cos he got a lifetime prescription of anti-septics...
^nice one
Ill put holes in your verse, leaving it looking like a site under construction...
Many words can describe you, like "You suck", like Gary coleman & Liposuction...
^good closer
Mediocre drop, definately seen better from you but you got the win...Had more punches n personals in there, nothing extremly bold but better than the other cat for sure. Vocab, structure n flow were tight...Not your best verse but get the win anyways.
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