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Old 04-30-05, 09:28 AM   #6
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Ight be ready, because i'm doing real voting none of that FL and EFL dickrider shit

Given Light:
This kid still can't block shots even with the name he's wearing
Poor guys so derranged when I flipped his name, he still wasn't south bearing
wack
Pfffff, the only thing we'll need this kid for is to fill the shelters
Cause you couldn't put together two bars if you was a fucking welder
like the concept, first line was wack, had potential but wack
How can you even think about judging someone else......
When your so wack, you pullin ya jokes off a book shelf
lol, this was ok..........
Fuck, it's another g-unit fan, man these guys have no skill
So even if your looking up to them as roll models, you still going downhill
hmmm, like concept was ok........
And we all know that Jay-Z was famous for his big dick suckin lips
Cause like a fat kid and food, this is just another shit ripped....
played as hell...fat kid lines=

overall a ight verse, not good not too bad elevate some

6.0/10


Tephlon:

kid was ''Given Light'' from a torch, typical........so now he thinks he shines
The Energizer bunny couldnt even charge ya brain power for these Rhymes
THIS IS PLAYED AS FUCK!
fuck punchlines! i saw ya battle vs ''hellz fire''...u got no defence, just Retire
thinkin' u got skill? HA!...Go write a topical on yourself about being a LIAR
not feeling this.......
your flows aint nothin but ''played''....like a radio station over doin' it..
dude trys ta cypher an even his whole crew sayin ...''stop! doin ruin' it''
lol, made me laugh but was aight
u got audios? ..shit, emcees ''shred'' the paper you attempt ta write On
this aint no topical shit, be sure the next time u sign its for the Right One
ok........
cause this aint your thing, its obvious with this K.O in the 1st Round...
ya far from PHAT, Even an english bumb is weighin up more Pounds..
NO......

6.5/10

you had a better verse, not much better not a good verse had some wack lines
i wasted how much time voting on this battle, bitches, lol and dont explain your punches next time fool....


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