Akwordz - Your Verse's Structure Wasn't There At All But I Caught On To The Scheme Once I Looked Over It Again. Not Too Much Of A Vocab But Your Point Gets Across. Nice Put Of Emotion and Message That Was Sent Threw. Needs For Improvement but Just Do Ya Thang.
BigChase - The Direction You Took Was Cool Cause Of The Olympics That Are Going On Right Now...So In My Eyes You Based Your Ish Off That. Your Structure Wasn't Too Nice...Emotion and Getting The Point Across Wasn't As Nice As Awkords In My Eyes. But Nice Drop.....Just Elevate Man.
Vote - AkwordZ
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