Good battle fellas

Breakdown for verbal:

Paramik Was Weary Of This Battle,Who Could Blaim Him
Flow In Instant Messengers Only Time Ya Punches R AIM'n

Setup was just there didn't have nothing to do wit punch, punch was based on a kinda played concept but was creative, but worded poorly.

Like Intoxicated Rivers ... Ya Vile Flows Are Shunned
Mixin Drinks n Toxins Is The Only Way U Have a Deadly Punch

Setup has a nice meta "intoxicated river"<--I liked that, punch was pretty goos too, only prob was the bars didn't rhyme...but definitely very creative.
Computers Best Friend, Just Another Internet Groupie
Ya Avatar Is Self Explanitary net Geek, Buddys Are 2D

Haha!!!!That was funny, again very creative meta, decent personal but its the meta that stood out...setup worked perfectly for this one.

Ill Para-Lize Ya MiK..Was Already Impossible To Win This
Tourny Is Urs, But Im Afraid No Rap In The Para-Lympic

Setup was blah seemed u was trying to rhyme with para-lympic too bad...but the meta in the punch again is what stood out to me..creativity is nice.

I'd Give You A Win Outta Sympathy, It Won't Be Belived
Unthinkable, How Can I Be Beat By A Spider Man-Geek

Setup was blah on this too, punch was also kinda blah...spider geek is a corny diss, an a weak way to close but it was fair nothing great.


Breakdown for Paramik:

Verbal Phenom cant lyrically spit venom cause it aint a verb…
Cause the way ya venom flows…. easily gets cured by a herb.

Eh for a opener...setup was weak coulda used a different meta other than its not a verb, punch was eh...not really hard hitting but a creative meta.

So you can call me apothecary, the way im removing ya venom.
Might as well call him anthrax…..
………………………………the way the poison letters stopped sendin’.

I personally hate went catz structure a line like this^^^setup was nice I liked that...but punch was played an anthrax line?<---very played

Fact is this kid’s not even important, VP’s the VP without the I.
Joined the newbie bashing crew, proves this kid’s not a wise guy.

Again great setup had me anticipating a harsh punch but ya punch killed it...it was jus weak.

This kid is lines are a joke, I didn't really need to post a verse.
The crowd woudn't feel your flow if they were dieing of thirst.

Setup was blah seems u was looking for a rhyme wit thirst, an punch was blah..I see what u was trying for but it was worded horrible.

Another fag battling me, he always so proud about getting beat.
I mean who places shit in their sig, like a link to their Defeat?

The link didn't show anything when I clicked it so this made no sense to me...so I have to say it was weak cuz I can't see anything in link.


Verbal:
Flow: 9/10
Structure: 8/10
Punches: 7/10
Metas: 9/10
Creativity: 8/10
Overall:41/50


Para:
Flow: 8/10
Structure: 7/10
Punches: 7/10
Meta: 7/10
Creativity: 7/10
Overall: 36/50

Vote: Verbal

Verbal had a more consistent verse in my opinion, and the metas in it were nice, para started out decetn but started to fade out towards end so I gave it to verbal based on that.

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