Originally Posted by cu cullian

honestly dude judging jus from that song alone u hyped your self up way to much to be alot better than u actually are, i aint sayin it was bad but u seriously hyped yourself up way to much and to be honest if u never went on so much bout how you aer gonna be leadin austrailia rap n shit man then i wuda said it was decent for rv but instead u made yourself seem like u gonna hit the scene like a new 50 in a sense of impact

but for feedbk eh to be honest i cudnt understand most the shit u said i only started to understand u a good bit on the kweli beat n i never got your accent till like the beat changed twice or 3 times so i tinhk u might be forcing your accent not to be as strong which is koo cause i wud do the same if i was tryin to break america but dont do it unless u can hold it for the entire song altho i got to say a 170 bar song shudnt be used to judge that

honestly ill wait till i see a normal length song from u before i honestly judge not cause i cant play attention to a 170 bar song jus cause i know to spit that much is hard and your voice cant stay the same the whole time and so many reasons to y the song aint your best cause of the length so ill wait till i hear more shit from u