Killah Bwoy
You verse was okay.........you had good punches you`re flow was okay and your rhyme scheme was good......you should work on your punches a lil more so that they hit harder and stick better there was a few good lines not the best but they was still okay.keep elevatin kid

L.I
your structre was good along with you flow that was onpoint..........you had good wordplay and didnt try to use to much........you had good punches and they hit hard.......your personals was good and espically the line about his avatar....i liked how you came out witty and added some humor to it

v/L.I.

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