Champ you are indeed but let me plant the first seed,
So what am i?? if your jus one of many bitches hanging off me like a necklace beed.
na, this was a weak opener imo
Kirk by name captain lonely by nature,
it's not your fault that peps dont rate ya,if you wonna be in with ya mates get a new avatar.
hmm, not really harsh hitting at all.
You let me drop first so again you choose to follow rather then lead like a king,
i feel sorrow for you wanting to be part of me so i'l guide you under my wing.
again not harsh, but ok punch.
I'l flip your lame ass ryhme scemes all over the shop your style is loaned,
but i like you so after this demolishion i'l pick u up just after i hold high the cup you once owned.
self glory, you need to be direct and mean with your insults.
So as it stands your favourite so im the challenger,
but i occupy the greatness tag and your jus along for the ride as passenger.
lol, k
Im solid in this game and i'l show ya prevoking this joke,
you mimic washed up folk and now your just stuck in the middle like egg yolk.
hm, again not very harsh.
So these be lines 13/14 from where your hanging i cant be seen,
u roll with has beens now washed up better known as crack fiend's.
not creative,
Your not needed in this life you couldnt get a clip on jeremy beadle,
So i give you this advice give up the crack and pick up the needle.
stay off the crack concepts, this wasn't that great of a closer.

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Think you runnin' this but I'll Sonya. Actin' like a tyrant when the gay battles me,
But in this M-K match up. I'll fuckin' MASH this controller till it ends in a fatality,
good concept, you didn't flip it well at all though. weak opener
Am I prepared? Well, I've repped Maryland since birth and my fires crushin' mic.'s,
So who needs practice, bitch? I've been walkin' all over MD my entire fuckin' life,
played, but since you live there its a fresh flip its pretty solid
Can't rap for shit, you pedo faggot. Talkin' bout how your verses makin' girls wet,
What do you know about sweet 16s? Your bitch hasn't even celebrated hers yet,
na, sweet 16 is gettin played..you did somethin like this a few weeks ago.
You got crowds of 10 to 12 years olds yellin. All I can say is fuck, that's sad,
With them preteens yellin' "OH M...... GEE! How does he fuckin' suck that bad?!"
lol, this is a signature kirk punch
Talkin' about avys and shit, bro. LAWL. I'd claim that you had that 05 style son,
But seriously, kid.... YOUR avatar is clearly where your style derived from,
okay, but I'm gonna not count this punch cuz it was feedin off somethin he said in his verse.
And everybodies reppin' DBZ. Well, I'd hop on the bandwagon but it's a waste,
Who needs to rep it? When I've been dragon balls... all over your bitches face,
haha, nice
And lmao at your sig..Bro, that easily tells me that you're a pure chump,
But guess what else means nothing without U? ......The word suck.
liked this,
You tiny little bitch. Its a waste of time even thinkin' this twig has got fans,
I'ma bail though. Cause I could smash a fuckin' stick playin' Rockband.
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This was kinda one sided, which is to be expected from kirk.. You need to avoid played concepts bro, the number of line concepts is played to death..dont' use those, other then that besides the line that was technically feeding it was solid, dragon balls line was good, md was aight..word suck was coo, omg was good..mk coulda been good, but you didnt' flip it good,
meltdown, the greatness tag was the only actual punch I was feelin..you need to be more direct an harsher with your punch, avoid self glory..an crack lines are played concepts, i wasn't feelin the pick up the needle line or washed up like crack fiends lines at all..you got potential, you jus need to figure out which concepts are TOO played to be viewed as decent bro,.. hopefully you'll sign up for next season.. I think kirk got this with a more direct verse.

v/Kirk

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