true just make sure you don't sound like that on every track, and either way even if you do someone elses song just use your own style that way you make it seem like you're taking over that shit with your own swagg.

The chorus is still ugly, you better off doing it in your own voice man, and yea the dubs are waaaaaaaay better now and I can actually understand what you're saying most of the time, nice rhyme scheme and multi's man, you still gotta work on your flow a bit though cuz it's choppy and once you elevate that you'll be good to go and you can invest in better audio equipment