ok....the first verse was ok...had some misspelling with the bigger words though....but flowed smoother and was easier to read than your second and third verses.... the second and third verse u fell off ...it seems like u were just rushing on those verses...u even repeated yourself on one part.....the hooks weren't good they seemed rushed to......no punches or metas in it nothing like that.... after all u saying u the "lyrical hustla" so i expected those....so yeah u should actually slow down and think about what your putting down instead of rushing it.....

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