This was a surprisingly good peace man. Though I feel you failed to stay consistant with your flow and vocab. You had perfect flow and vocab throughout your first half of the verse..though after that it seemed as if you lost and sort of intelligance and sort of brought it to real life...and just straight up said waht you had to say...which wasnt nessacarly bad..but it was very noticable. The imagery was kind of bland to me really....but the emotion was greatly felt...i think thats what made your piece....overal really good drop id give it 7.5 out of ten man..keep up the good work

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