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Old 08-10-08, 04:26 PM   #11
JTR
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the road to victory's always different, so listen, you won't stop me
cause personally i like to bash a Way... and leave bruises all over his body
nah didnt like this wordplay
this dudes in the gutter, and me, i strike down the whole alley
i really don't have to state much about him... just he's lucky he beat CALI
nah dawg too simple
cause i read that whack verse, and lemme say, it was beyond lame
and i'm not talking about western films, i've dropped better shit on the John, Wayne
lol the john part is played but you flipped it with the nameplay
enough with the gangsta drama bitch, you can tell that you're a class whimp
i bet the last time you tried actin' hard, probly got your ass whipped
lmao nah way too simple
Taco always swings hard, so everyone knows i'll smack this whore in
and leave him with a Dent so big... Gotham City would be asking for him
this was cool
its dinner time though, so peace to wayne, the mod... one last hit for the day
just know i'm not talking nameplays or girlfriends... but this was a lil easy, lay
wasnt feeling this

vs.

see i understand his panic... beatin me? you ever so wrong
when i squad up, this essay'll need back up, so ET better phone holmes
fucking wack, played, and aint even rhyme at all
so face it bloke, i'll bring the racist jokes you're outta luck
he dont stand a quarter of a chance.... cause he's breakin his back tryin to pick it up
nah man wasnt good lol
I am batman? i guess bruce's outcome is always the same
lookin for a bale out? funny cause the W will end in my name
you coulda flipped this wordplay so much better homie
Els always dinin on meatheads, with a mouth wide for fun
tried tossin salads, but taco never thinks outside the bun
tacos dont have buns lmao...
he leads a faggot life, not dope, he's borderline like a hermaphrodite
his skill in black and white? well, more like the michael jackson type
lol ok but still not good
you aint half as nice, with no delays or hope you better plan it right
his life is on a wing and a prayer, and i clearly just cancelled flight
this was already used homie, played

ok ima have to vote for flight cuz lil wayne you didnt rhyme at good man, and ur wording was bad some concepts were ok but u needa work on them, word them better dawg

v/ Flight
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