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Old 05-09-07, 01:58 AM   #2
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beat is cool..that voice is annoying.

1st dude - vocals are a little low..dont like his voice. kinda sounds annoying and monotonous. flow is cool though and it works for this beat. didnt really fall off. delivery was cool.

empty space is weird. and its too long with nothing there. at least introduce yourself

2nd verse - got a little more swag than first dude..quality sounds like you kinda fell off a little. i dont get it though. first youre a christian rapper and then youre not and then you are again? not too sure whats up with you..

empty space again..kinda sucks cause it makes me wanna turn it off

3rd verse - swagga boi? thats a pretty funny name..dont like this dude as much as the first 2. lyrically nothing special. rhyme scheme is real basic.

4th verse - like this dudes delivery and everything most..lyrically its nothing that really stood out. but he jus sounds better with this beat than everyone else. a few lines sound a little rushed though



maybe the outro have some talkin or something..the hook sounds real empty. wish yall woulda came with more energy on the whole track.
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