Voted For: -UNF-

T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.
T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.

T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.
T-hook-Make your lines longer.Ur structure was off horibbly.Make your lines into bar couplets.So that one line is a set-up and the other is a punch.You were just stating shit.And a lot of your lines was you talking about yourself.Elevate a lot.

Vote-UNF....for actually spitting a real battle verse.
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